Check the seats

Check all the seats in the front of the bus.
Check every seat, and don't make a fuss.
Check the back seats and the front ones.
Check all the seats for lost daughters and sons.
Check under the seats when the day has ended.
Check on the seats, don't leave any children unattended.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Sidwell Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 11:20 AM
Excellent poem! What helps better than repetition? Great style choice and fun read - congrats on the win!
Crocus Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 4:55 AM
Thank you! :D
Hawley Avatar
April 21, 2024 at 3:59 PM
Crystal clear instructions on how to do a proper child search on a bus like mine. Oh yes, I am the monitor, not the driver. Congratulations on your win in my contest.
Crocus Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 4:56 AM
Thank you :)
Agustin Avatar
April 13, 2024 at 5:56 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts on "Checking Seats" through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Crocus Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 4:55 AM
Thank you ( •` u •´ )
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