Check In With Yourself

As focus slows the runner’s off
Mind bolts here and there
Your past and future, autodrive
A map of where we care

Frequent flyer stops abound
Our fears and dreams 
Round and Round

Listen watch and learn
Love your stops little bird
Feed and care for your song
Yours alone can be heard
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Juman Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 3:16 PM
Beautiful write
Ajmal Avatar
June 22, 2017 at 8:09 AM
Hey weclome to petrysoup, may you enjoyed your long time here, anyway you re a very good poet, you ve written your first poem beautifully, i really enjoyed reading it, and continue to write, I ll be looking for your poems however I m also new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest about them
White Avatar
June 22, 2017 at 1:26 AM
I like it how your middle stanza separates the one above and below, in expression, in meaning. Welcome to PoetrySoup.
Browne Avatar
June 21, 2017 at 12:25 PM
Can relate to how your mind doesn't want to stop, when you try to be still!
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