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As focus slows the runner’s off Mind bolts here and there Your past and future, autodrive A map of where we care Frequent flyer stops abound Our fears and dreams Round and Round Listen watch and learn Love your stops little bird Feed and care for your song Yours alone can be heard

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Date: 7/9/2018 3:16:00 PM
Beautiful write
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Date: 6/22/2017 8:09:00 AM
Hey weclome to petrysoup, may you enjoyed your long time here, anyway you re a very good poet, you ve written your first poem beautifully, i really enjoyed reading it, and continue to write, I ll be looking for your poems however I m also new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest about them
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Date: 6/22/2017 1:26:00 AM
I like it how your middle stanza separates the one above and below, in expression, in meaning. Welcome to PoetrySoup.
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Date: 6/21/2017 12:25:00 PM
Can relate to how your mind doesn't want to stop, when you try to be still!
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