Check engine

When I became a passenger bound.
With you in this way,
My engine coughed a mournful sound,
With a dim warning on the array

A check light soon blazed; your orange warning sign,
My future is futile and stark,
I feared the road, the desire to journey was no longer mine,
You could have just left me, alone in the dark

But you, you shone, a guiding grace,
beacons dispelling doom,
Your high beams lit my weary face,
And chased away this mind's lowly gloom

You showed me paths I couldn't see,
Beyond doubt and fear,
Destiny belongs to me,
A reason to be here

The road stretched out, 
a silver thread,
Unfurling in the light,
Purpose had been gently led,
Burned ever clear; exemplary bright

You changed my sparkless perspective
Becoming a repair so effective
My soul now lives by directive
As your happiness became our collective

Feeling loved, now we drive on,
The engine hums like new,
I'm a passenger, where hope's our bond,
Because I traveled with you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Hind Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 8:49 PM
Both of us writing of cars today! - lovely language, the best and love for your journey....love that ending
Scorpio Avatar
October 1, 2025 at 5:40 AM
The journey is always improving because of the travelers on the road! Best wishes for you every day, love!! A.S.
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