Phyllis Babcock Poet Rhyme

Cheatin' Ways

You broke every part of me
Abandoned my heart , you see
Numb and barely hanging on
I wondered what went wrong.

I trusted you but that trust  got lost
Now look at the  two of us, the final cost
Broken in pieces and scattered apart
You abandoned me in your heart.

Temptation stole you from me
Our love light refuses to glow , to be
A second chance you will not score
Your wandering way closed our door.

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 29, 2011 at 12:18 PM broken hearts always are the reward of the cheaters club Phyl.. great expressions for the contest ..good luck.. my friend.. any snow yet? today we have it all..rain..snow..sleet.. ice.. icicles.. oh.. where is the beach?

Andrea Dietrich October 28, 2011 at 12:50 AM Hey, phyllis. It's very late. I just am stopping by to say hello!

Gwendolen Song October 27, 2011 at 2:45 PM I got a banjo to play along with this cheatin song...love the style and tempo here, Phyllis. I never look back on any one who ever cheated on me....but I think I might to write a clever song! lol. Gwendolen

Carol Sunshine Brown October 27, 2011 at 12:23 PM Stopping by to thank you for your kind comments on my writing Phyllis. I enjoyed reading yours today and wish you the best in the contest. Love, Carol

Elizabeth Wesley October 27, 2011 at 9:52 AM Hi Phyllis, finally found you. You sure pack a punch in this sad poem. Always good when we can close the door on a bade experience. Lizzy

James Peranteau October 27, 2011 at 7:40 AM The first One cheated on was, Jehovah God Almighty dear poet, and then, each other until this day. Such a selfish act Deb. Me oh my, you struck a nerve with this soul my friend. You have written a fine piece here Deb. Have a beautiful week....much love,james

Nathan D. October 27, 2011 at 6:41 AM shame so many waste so much of thier lives on someone that doens't love them very nicley written sad poem

Andrea Dietrich October 27, 2011 at 12:47 AM Good way to do a cheatin' poem, Phyllis and how cool to see you put up a new poem! Luv ya, Andrea

Deb Wilson October 26, 2011 at 12:24 PM Good tale about a cheater..hope it's only fictional! Love.Deb

Sara Kendrick October 26, 2011 at 11:46 AM Enjoyed reading your creative work..If one has cheated, more than likely it will happen again..Good decision to let it end..That is unless the person gets professional help..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work.I appreciate you taking the time to do so.Oh you would know that the autoharp was out of tune for it has some really sour sounds...Sara