Chastity

Destroyer ~ Poet
Contest Name	first love poem~ (on the soup)


Chastity

Poland I know was where we were
 i was him and you were her
 we laughed and danced and sprung about
but i was just a village lout
 yes you were fine of feature, grand
but i went by sea and left the land
i saw no more of you i slipped
over the side when the rigging ripped 
great white shark won't let me be
teeth rip great holes, in i see,   
and just before the shark took me
 i thought of you sweet chastity
 
Don Johnson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 9:08 AM
Congratulations on your win in P. D.'s "first love poem (on the soup)" contest Don. Love, Carol
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November 29, 2011 at 5:35 PM
I'm glad he had the chance to laugh and dance with his love before his untimely end..Congratulations Don, well done...cheers Margaret
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November 29, 2011 at 4:15 PM
Dear Don a winner you be! congratulations mate! Luv Lizzie
Quigley Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 10:33 PM
A great write Don. Enjoyed. Congrats
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November 28, 2011 at 9:59 PM
DON,.. Congratulations on your wonderful win, IN MY "first love poem on the soup" CONTEST* I would also like to thank you for the support. Take care, and have yourself a great night,. ;-) ~p.d.
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March 30, 2011 at 8:11 AM
love till the end - a beautiful write my friend.
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