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Chastity

Destroyer ~ Poet Contest Name first love poem~ (on the soup) Chastity Poland I know was where we were i was him and you were her we laughed and danced and sprung about but i was just a village lout yes you were fine of feature, grand but i went by sea and left the land i saw no more of you i slipped over the side when the rigging ripped great white shark won't let me be teeth rip great holes, in i see, and just before the shark took me i thought of you sweet chastity Don Johnson

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Date: 11/30/2011 9:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P. D.'s "first love poem (on the soup)" contest Don. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/29/2011 5:35:00 PM
I'm glad he had the chance to laugh and dance with his love before his untimely end..Congratulations Don, well done...cheers Margaret
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Date: 11/29/2011 4:15:00 PM
Dear Don a winner you be! congratulations mate! Luv Lizzie
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Date: 11/28/2011 10:33:00 PM
A great write Don. Enjoyed. Congrats
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Date: 11/28/2011 9:59:00 PM
DON,.. Congratulations on your wonderful win, IN MY "first love poem on the soup" CONTEST* I would also like to thank you for the support. Take care, and have yourself a great night,. ;-) ~p.d.
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Date: 3/30/2011 8:11:00 AM
love till the end - a beautiful write my friend.
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