Notes About The Poem

Chasing Perfection

So many of us pull strands of hair out of our scalp
all in the name of perfection, but why chase this illusion?
There's true beauty in being perfectly imperfect.



Date written: 07/28/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kendrick Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 8:04 AM
They say that Amish women when making a quilt make one error somewhere on the quilt so that there is imperfection in it. I would not have to had to put in an imperfection though. LOL..I would have had many imperfections within the work. I enjoyed reading your winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
Ibeh Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 10:42 AM
Never knew that about Amish women.Quite interesting! Thanks for the wonderful visit and feedback, Sara:-)
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 11:16 AM
love that "perfectly imperfect" part. So true. Big congrats.
Ibeh Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 3:40 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea:-)
Alex Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 6:48 AM
I do not know about the orm. But, the poem is truly beautiful. Congratulations on your win!
Ibeh Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 6:58 AM
Thank you very much, Christuraj:-)
Godwin Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 8:59 PM
I totally agree. It is why we shouldn't sue each other, in my opinion. We are human thus the term 'human error', plus I'm pretty sure if one achieves perfection they needn't be born again. Good write! All the best ... CayCay
Ibeh Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 6:37 AM
Thank you so much, CayCay:-) I echo your sentiments! All the best to you, too.
Sands Avatar
July 29, 2019 at 9:43 AM
Great one Edward. This is true :)
Ibeh Avatar
July 29, 2019 at 12:06 PM
Thank you, Heidi:-)
Gauthier Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 10:56 PM
Perfect, Edward! Love it.
Ibeh Avatar
July 29, 2019 at 5:33 AM
Thank you, Line:-)
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