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Chasing a Ghost

I've seen you I've followed you I've loved you You loved me Once You followed me Once You needed me Once And now you've begun to fade And now I chase you And follow you And still love you But you don't look back to find me Unless it's to see If I'm still chasing you And yet I run And run And I can't catch you And you don't look back I've grown tired And I cannot run anymore So now I sit And mourn For my ghost

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Tanya Jenkins

Date: 11/16/2010 10:04:00 AM

You captured all of my previous relationships...lol I really enjoyed reading your poem

Duncan Chappell

Date: 10/29/2010 4:26:00 AM

i love this peace my friend thank you duncan

Eamon Duffin

Date: 10/28/2010 8:04:00 AM

Hi Krissy B. Great work . Keep writing, Eamon

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/28/2010 7:31:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Krissy. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Krissy B

Date: 10/27/2010 3:44:00 PM

Thanks everyone for you kind comments!! Really give me a lot of confidence!!

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 10/27/2010 2:58:00 PM

Wow I give you a 7 for this because it describes excatly what I,m going through at the monent except for the last to verses i haven't reached there yet. Welcome to the soup

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/27/2010 11:53:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your poetry today with its creative theme.. hope u check out the contest page offered to new members..good luck with luv..

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 10/27/2010 10:53:00 AM

Hi Krissy.I enjoyed reading this .It's a subject we all write about that is everything we all want and need.Love, and you have expressed it so well through your words and ideas. A really nice poem.Thank you for sharing it. Look forward to more. Luv June(sylvia)