Tim B Poet Quintain (English)

Chartered

Flights set me free in my mindset
Troubles a'comin in the rearview
Dear, how do you remain so kind?
Setting up a chartered flight so clear
Heaven's my destination soon near

I'm going to make the call a lil later
The office isn't open at the moment
Flights aren't free and seems they cater
To the rich in spirit and I must lament;
I'm broke right now, and completely spent


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For Francine's English Quintain contest
Written: 12/9/11
By: Tim B.

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Anne-Lise Andresen December 14, 2011 at 9:15 AM Tim it is good. OXOX Love from Norway and Anne-Lise

Andrea Dietrich December 9, 2011 at 8:46 PM hmmm, better take advantage of this time while the office is closed, Tim. I liked this flight analogy!!

Nancy Jones December 9, 2011 at 5:05 PM That's the spirit! love it muchly ~N