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Flights set me free in my mindset Troubles a'comin in the rearview Dear, how do you remain so kind? Setting up a chartered flight so clear Heaven's my destination soon near I'm going to make the call a lil later The office isn't open at the moment Flights aren't free and seems they cater To the rich in spirit and I must lament; I'm broke right now, and completely spent ____________________________________ For Francine's English Quintain contest Written: 12/9/11 By: Tim B.

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Date: 12/14/2011 9:15:00 AM
Tim it is good. OXOX Love from Norway and Anne-Lise
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Date: 12/9/2011 8:46:00 PM
hmmm, better take advantage of this time while the office is closed, Tim. I liked this flight analogy!!
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Date: 12/9/2011 5:05:00 PM
That's the spirit! love it muchly ~N
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