Charm Bracelet

I wear a charm bracelet that you once gave to me, and every charm on it holds a special memory
The very first one has my initials before I took your last name, the next is a four-leaf clover for good luck every day
I have a ruby slipper because you told me that I was your princess on earth, and one about our friendship where our love started first
A white horse representing you riding in and saving me, a half-moon that you hold the other piece

A fairy to make all my wishes come true, an angel to protect me when I’m feeling blue
A diamond ring and oh how it shines, the initial of your last name that would one day be mine
A little boy and a little girl for what our future would be, a Cinderella pumpkin for you to carry my dreams
A butterfly to symbolize the love that would one day fly away, the lonely carousel with no one left to play

A sunflower so beautiful because you said it reminded you of me, and then lastly a heart that you eventually broke when you took your love away from me.

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Date: 5/31/2023 10:48:00 PM
A lovely heartfelt poem Amanda. I like how you've structured your poem around the charms on your bracelet. There is much poignancy in the last line. Cheers - Gary
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Amanda Kinzer
Date: 7/4/2023 7:40:00 PM
Thanks, Gary, for your kind words. Cheers to you.
Date: 3/22/2023 5:34:00 PM
Beautifully poignant, Amanda! Love lost so eloquently expressed.
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Amanda Kinzer
Date: 3/22/2023 6:41:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 3/21/2023 8:17:00 PM
Wow ! This is a beautiful poem you wrote ! :) Great job :)
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Amanda Kinzer
Date: 3/22/2023 11:41:00 AM
Thank you so much dear poet!
Date: 3/21/2023 1:00:00 PM
Nice penning Amanda, with good rhyme and flow too.really nice work indeed. Blessings,Gordon
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Amanda Kinzer
Date: 3/21/2023 2:55:00 PM
Thank you so much Gordon! Blessings to you!
Date: 3/2/2023 12:53:00 PM
Beautifully done, especially the "lonely carousel with no one left to play." Elizabeth
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Amanda Kinzer
Date: 3/4/2023 2:58:00 PM
Thank you so much!!
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