Charlieku--Giggles

A  honeyed smile ~
in night’s dash
enchants

Giggling on tricks
     peek-a-boo!
     he reels

 My infant’s cheeks
    fresh  as moon ~
    I kiss



Charlieku 4-3-2  for Charles Messina
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Theme: Happiness  10/16/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 8:25 PM
Nette, congratulations on your great win in this Senryu contest.. so loving :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 11:52 PM
yours is adorable, Nette! congrats on the win.
Allison Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 3:12 PM
Made me smile!Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 10:27 AM
Lovely, nette. Congrats on your top win. A FAVE for me.
Andresen Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 2:24 AM
- Congratulations on your great Charlieku, Nette :) - Have a nice Tuesday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Messina Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 11:04 PM
I love these, Nette. Especially the last ku, you really hit home with that one. Great work. Congratulations on your win...hugs // Charlie :)
Vaso Avatar
October 18, 2018 at 1:39 AM
I like this, so very sweet!
Wolf Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 11:07 AM
Delightful! Precious! Endearing! Such a sweet entry for the contest, nette! ~ Gershon
Smith Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 10:00 AM
Happiness indeed, best wishes Nette...
Stevenson Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 6:12 PM
Super cute and very enjoyable. Big smiles, H
Kiser Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 5:19 PM
Now that's adorable; great imagery in this Charlieku; wonderful pen.
Callus Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 4:23 PM
Sweet moments of joy enjoyed between a mother and child. I know that the sponsor will enjoy these, too:) Hugs // paul
Daniel Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 5:20 AM
Brought on smiles, Nette:)
Godwin Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 3:19 AM
All good ones, each bright, uplifting and soothing to read. Guaranteed, these are all grin makers. All the best, Sweetie ... CayCay
Pandit Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 5:55 PM
Sweet smiles..wonderfully done, nette.
Green Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 4:10 PM
That was really nice Nette. I loved this little slice of love.
Sands Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 3:39 PM
This is so sweet Nette! Excellent! :)
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