Charlieku - With a Twist

daybreak
	horizons
		sound the alarm
				awaken
					false dawn


©10/12/2018


for – Charlieku 4-3-2 poetry contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 8:30 PM
John, congratulations on your great win in this Haiku contest.. great imagery
Dietrich Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 11:53 PM
Great seeing this one again as I peruse the winner list. Congrats, John
Allison Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 2:35 PM
Love the clever twist on the Charlieku, many congrats John:-) hugs jan xx
Lawless Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 4:21 PM
Jan, I have often been accused of being a "bit twisted" over the years. Thanks for stopping by
Gauthier Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 10:33 AM
Congrats on your win, John.
Lawless Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 4:20 PM
Thanks Line, it seemed a bit of tight contest, glad to have placed
Andresen Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 2:23 AM
- Congratulations on your great Charlieku, John :) - Have a nice Tuesday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lawless Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 4:19 PM
Thank you anne-Lise
Dietrich Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 3:11 PM
gosh, I just gotta finally see what this form is all about becuase yours looks nothing like the other i just saw. Great write!
Lawless Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 4:17 PM
Well Andrea, I often epitomize the statement "Oh, look a my Johnny, he's the only one in the parade that's in step.".
Teagan Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 10:50 AM
Oh! I see what you did here! I kept seeing the "charlieku" poems so I finally went to the contests page to see what it's about. Nice twist!
Lawless Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 4:15 PM
Thanks for stopping by Becca, and sorry for the delay in responding I've been battling "the bug" for over a week.
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