Caren Krutsinger Poet Haiku

Charlieku Contest Poem - Christmas

on the roof
cookie crumbs
unnoticed

in the snow
long sleigh marks
excitement

joyous laugh
from window
boy and girl


Written 12-06-2018  Charlieku 3-3-3 Poetry Contest  Sponsor: Charles Messina

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M. L. Kiser December 7, 2018 at 6:41 AM This reminds me of the first Christmas that I pulled into the driveway of my Niece's house; the kids were lying on the bed upstairs, looking out of the window and just waving and smiling, as we got out of the car. Well penned. Caren Krutsinger December 7, 2018 at 7:19 AM It is marvelous to see these little dolls, they bring the REAL Christmas spirit into your life faster than anything else.

Tom Cunningham December 7, 2018 at 3:05 AM A lovely Christmas hakiu Caren, can just see the children's faces. Tom Good luck. Caren Krutsinger December 7, 2018 at 3:35 AM Thank you Tom. I could see them too.