Charlieku

Today
 opened up
my mind
 to something
so true.

 Change is hard,
failure,
 even more,
relax.

 Keep it cool,
just live
 and let be.

Life is
 too damn short.

 No worries!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Roper Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 9:49 PM
Early Jae, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Andresen Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 1:43 PM
- Congratulations on your great suggestions E.J. - // ... a fun contest :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 1:16 PM
Congrats!
Jae Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 2:21 PM
Thanks!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 12:53 PM
Optimism lays the groundwork, whereto, there is no ceiling, my compliments Early Jae, Aloha wk
Jae Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 2:17 PM
Indeed it does, thank you!
Messina Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 7:30 AM
You've hit the nail on the head with this poem, Early. Great write love the ending and meaning of this. Congratulations on your 1st place win. ~Charlie
Jae Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 2:13 PM
Thank you so much!
May Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 6:04 PM
Your words are so true,...Very nicely expressed..
Jae Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 8:15 PM
Thank you!!
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