Charlieku

young children
place cookies
with fresh milk

upon hearth
for Santa
to enjoy -

then bed waits 
with magic 
dreams of morn




... CayCay Jennings
December 18, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kendrick Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 1:53 PM
I am sure it was a short night for them. Way to go with this winning work. Congrats on your winner. Sara
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January 1, 2019 at 11:45 PM
- Congratulations on your win in the Charlieku, CayCay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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January 1, 2019 at 8:14 PM
A wonderful Charlieku, CayCay, Great imagery. A very well done factful write. Enjoyed this one it made me smile. Congratulations on your placement in my contest. Wish you a very Healthy and Happy New Year...Charlie
Gauthier Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 3:36 PM
Lovely, CayCay. Beautiful flow.
Godwin Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 9:57 AM
Thank you, Line - much appreciated. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Cunningham Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 2:22 PM
Nicely done CayCay, brought back memories of when my kids believed. Good luck. Tom.
Godwin Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 9:56 AM
So glad to have touched your joyous Christmas memories. All the best ... CayCay
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December 18, 2018 at 12:17 PM
Hi CayCay, You have penned a good one for the contest theme.I could just picture the whole scene. I found the imagery to be adorable.Well done:-) Alexis
Godwin Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 9:55 AM
I just closed my eyes and saw my brother and I, eyes still closed, I flashed forward in time to see my son, Kyle, make those moves, too. I love Santa! Thank you for your sweet comments. All the best ... CayCay
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