Charlieku

Syllables 2-3-4

sparkling
asteroid;
nature’s fireworks.
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sunlight
sweeping fog;
colorful life.
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Syllables: 3-2-4

disused house;
old cage,
hanging bird's nest.
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Date - 18th October 2018

Contest - Charlieku by  Charles Messina
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 5:04 PM
Hello Augustus Black,I like what you have done with this poem. have a nice day my friend.
Palli Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 6:36 AM
Excellent! Well deserved win, Augustus
Roper Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 8:31 PM
Augustus, congratulations on your great win in this Haiku contest.. great Imagery
Dietrich Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 11:57 PM
congrats for your win, Augustus
Allison Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 3:16 PM
loved the images Augustus:-)Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 10:35 AM
Congrats on your win, Augustus.
Andresen Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 2:21 AM
- Congratulations on your great Charlieku, Augustus :) - Have a nice Tuesday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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