Premiere Contest WinnerCharlatan Summer

A hot air sauntered day, of early June
scalding sun smeared in salty sweat,
tears drenched a ground that  afternoon
on which you laid on ice, still in death.
A cold charlatan summer,  I'll never forget




6th May 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Lamoureux Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 9:33 AM
This is a interesting contemplative Write. Congrats on your trophy win.
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May 11, 2019 at 12:04 PM
'Debiani, Congratulations on your win! Very interesting. David:)'
Dutta Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 10:35 PM
BIG CONGRATS TO WIN TOP.
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