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23.02pm Sept. 8, 2024 Not for the contest because there are rhymes. I just triend Than-Bauk with rhymes. I you read and comment, thank you so much.

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gift with great force
to veer course for
its source to love

firethan-bauk

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/22/2024 12:25:00 PM

I really like this one too

Len Gasun
Date: 10/5/2024 3:59:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading and liking it my dearest poet friend Andrea. Sorry for coming late but I'll catch up soon on your page ok. Hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 9/9/2024 1:34:00 PM

Dear len, your did the rhymes so well, and i think they come naturally for you! Such a gifted soul you are! I love also the depth of what you’ve conveyed here, especially how youve depicted love in such a profound manner truly left me in awe! What a powerful and impressive than bauk! Pleasure reading your work! Sending you light always!

Len Gasun
Date: 9/15/2024 5:44:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words my dearest poet friend Ink. I'll visit you later or soon and the rests here. Blessings to you always. Hugs

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 9/9/2024 6:40:00 AM

Dear Len, I loved how you inked the transformative power of love. Love can change the world. Well Inked! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Len Gasun
Date: 9/15/2024 5:43:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words my dearest poet friend Daniel. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Tom Woody

Date: 9/8/2024 12:01:00 PM

Hey Len, love makes a great foundation for many things

Len Gasun
Date: 9/15/2024 5:42:00 AM

You are right my dear poet friend Tom. Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words. Blessings to you always. Hugs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/8/2024 11:16:00 AM

Len, a precious declaration of love unconditional...thanks for sharing: hope to connect with you very soon! huggs

Len Gasun
Date: 9/15/2024 5:41:00 AM

Thanks for coming to and reading my humble work and for your uplifiting words my dearest poet friend Nette. Blessings to you always. Hugs. Nakatulog ako dear sorry for the late reply.