Carrie Richards Poet Verse

Chariots of Fire

Deep in the dark
chariots race
streaking through space
piercing the night


Equines and sparks
long tails of light
gallop in flight
leaving no trace






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For Nette's Contest: "Ride a Pathya Vat"   'Chariots'
8/7/14  By Carrie Richards

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Casarah Nance August 11, 2014 at 6:31 PM Wonderful image! spectacular! well done on your win Carrie!

Debbie Guzzi August 11, 2014 at 3:00 PM I enjoyed this Carrie, it is chant like as requested. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 11, 2014 at 5:36 AM Congrats on ur awesome winning write Carrie!

Nette Onclaud August 11, 2014 at 5:06 AM this is a lovely piece with such a buoyant rhythm! i especially like the nature imagery you brought into this poem...thanks for supporting my contest and big cheers on your splendid win..huggs

Robert Lindley August 10, 2014 at 8:01 PM I like this write!!! The gods race chariots into the mists of exploding time The poets sing of their fantastic journeys in glowing imaginative rhyme.

Jan Allison August 10, 2014 at 9:31 AM dropping back with my congratulations Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx

Mohan Chutani August 10, 2014 at 6:24 AM congrats Carrie, on a fine win. Mohan

Dr.Ram Mehta August 10, 2014 at 5:40 AM Dropping again to congratulate you on the win, Carrie

Dr.Ram Mehta August 8, 2014 at 6:21 AM Nice approach to the theme of the contest, Carrie

Jan Allison August 8, 2014 at 3:14 AM yet another excellent take on the theme - Nette is going to have fun judging this one- good luck:-) Hugs Jan xx