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Chariots of Fire

Deep in the dark chariots race streaking through space piercing the night Equines and sparks long tails of light gallop in flight leaving no trace ___________________________________ For Nette's Contest: "Ride a Pathya Vat" 'Chariots' 8/7/14 By Carrie Richards

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Date: 8/11/2014 6:31:00 PM
Wonderful image! spectacular! well done on your win Carrie!
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Date: 8/11/2014 3:00:00 PM
I enjoyed this Carrie, it is chant like as requested. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 8/11/2014 5:36:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Carrie!
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Date: 8/11/2014 5:06:00 AM
this is a lovely piece with such a buoyant rhythm! i especially like the nature imagery you brought into this poem...thanks for supporting my contest and big cheers on your splendid win..huggs
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Date: 8/10/2014 8:01:00 PM
I like this write!!! The gods race chariots into the mists of exploding time The poets sing of their fantastic journeys in glowing imaginative rhyme.
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Date: 8/10/2014 9:31:00 AM
dropping back with my congratulations Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/10/2014 6:24:00 AM
congrats Carrie, on a fine win. Mohan
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Date: 8/10/2014 5:40:00 AM
Dropping again to congratulate you on the win, Carrie
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Date: 8/8/2014 6:21:00 AM
Nice approach to the theme of the contest, Carrie
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Date: 8/8/2014 3:14:00 AM
yet another excellent take on the theme - Nette is going to have fun judging this one- good luck:-) Hugs Jan xx
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