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I pulled in late one night from off the pike, A manor rumored haunted, yet it seemed As clean and bright as any hotel deemed, So worthy of what guests as I would like. A busy place, yet there was still a room, The "only vacancy" they had to spare, But walking to my room I came aware, That everything was quiet as a tomb. So many people strolling to-and-fro, Thus seeming to communicate at will, And yet, despite it all, the air was still, And why that was, I doubt Ill ever know. I got to bed, but didn't get much sleep, For when I shut my door the din began - As though an all-night party was at hand, An uproar that went on 'til morning's creep. I nodded off just 'fore the sun arose, Awakened to the dawning with a start, A sight that I will always set apart, For instantly, the blood within me froze ... It seems I'd spent the night inside my car, The manor, out my window, aged and vile, I stayed there in a trance for quite awhile, Recalling what I'd seen that night, bizarre. It may have been a dream or mind canard, But I will swear 'til death that it was real, And nothing then or since can e'er reveal, Those charges placed upon ... my credit card. Written and submitted on January 22, 2019 For the "Night In A Haunted Manor" Poetry Contest Tania Kitchin, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 1/24/2019 9:04:00 AM
Such an eerie poem, Greg! I enjoyed the suspense which conjured up a few endings in my mind as I was reading it, but never expected the double surprise ending! As always, well-done, and congratulations on your win! Sandra :)
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Date: 1/23/2019 7:30:00 PM
Nicely done, Greg, you have created great imagery and feeling on your well written poem. . Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 1/23/2019 7:28:00 PM
Very interesting how you woke in your car, Greg, unsure as to whether the events you remembered had even occurred until you saw the credit card charges. Well done! Congratulations on your win in Tania's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 1/23/2019 7:02:00 PM
Ha, ha -- a spook-out that turns into a chuckle-fest!! Love those last couple of stanzas, my friend! G.L. in the contest. Best always, Gershon ( soup mail )
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Date: 1/23/2019 6:03:00 PM
Greg, I enjoyed your spooky tale with the fun twist at the end, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Date: 1/22/2019 10:47:00 PM
Love the mysterious question of was it all just a dream??? Being answered by your credit card bill! Love this playful take on the theme :)
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