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With silence weighed, the moonlight fades to play charade, before it's found. The moon on track, folds into black, then staggers back, without a sound.
_____________________________________________ 12//8/14 ” Remember what peace there may be in silence.” For Nette's Contest DESIDERATA By Carrie Richards

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Date: 12/26/2014 9:07:00 PM
CARRIE, CONGRATULATIONS on your "DESIDERATA," winning poem... always ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/16/2014 8:08:00 AM
Your poem whispers peace Carrie. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/16/2014 5:10:00 AM
the beauty of silence delightfully delivered, carrie... a special write!..a pleasure to have you in my contest with my big congrats!
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Date: 12/15/2014 10:02:00 AM
So much with a few words, Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/14/2014 6:50:00 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your win for this lovely poem that presents such beautiful imagery in so few words! Sandra
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Date: 12/14/2014 5:18:00 PM
the moon as mime in silent phase... beautiful Carrie
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Date: 12/14/2014 4:01:00 PM
Hi Carrie! This is very imaginative and the imagery is great...so is the flow. Congrats on your top win. // paul
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Date: 12/14/2014 1:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Carrie
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Date: 12/14/2014 10:48:00 AM
playful moon. You showed it so well. BIG congrats, Carrie. Loved your pictures I got in mail .
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Date: 12/14/2014 9:30:00 AM
many congrats on your win Carrie:-) hugs jan x
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Date: 12/14/2014 7:18:00 AM
Very nice.congratulations Carrie
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Date: 12/14/2014 4:20:00 AM
I enjoyed the beautiful imagery in the poem, congrats on the win, Carrie
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Date: 12/14/2014 2:08:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Carrie !
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Date: 12/14/2014 12:53:00 AM
This tops my table and enlarges my Fav,I so much love the verse two "...then staggers back...,congrats on the win Carrie...huggs
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Date: 12/9/2014 6:04:00 AM
Hello Carrie, I like the flow and vision...
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Date: 12/8/2014 9:03:00 PM
Nice penned verses Carrie dear friend! GL in contest! xxxD.
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