Charade

With silence weighed, the moonlight fades to play charade, before it's found. The moon on track, folds into black, then staggers back, without a sound.
_____________________________________________ 12//8/14 ” Remember what peace there may be in silence.” For Nette's Contest DESIDERATA By Carrie Richards
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December 26, 2014 at 9:07 PM
CARRIE, CONGRATULATIONS on your "DESIDERATA," winning poem... always ~LINDA~
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 8:08 AM
Your poem whispers peace Carrie. Congratulations on your win.
Onclaud Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 5:10 AM
the beauty of silence delightfully delivered, carrie... a special write!..a pleasure to have you in my contest with my big congrats!
Yvonne Avatar
December 15, 2014 at 10:02 AM
So much with a few words, Congratulations on your win.
Haight Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 6:50 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your win for this lovely poem that presents such beautiful imagery in so few words! Sandra
Lawless Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 5:18 PM
the moon as mime in silent phase... beautiful Carrie
Callus Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 4:01 PM
Hi Carrie! This is very imaginative and the imagery is great...so is the flow. Congrats on your top win. // paul
Stoner Jr Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 1:59 PM
Congratulations on your win Carrie
Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 10:48 AM
playful moon. You showed it so well. BIG congrats, Carrie. Loved your pictures I got in mail .
Allison Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 9:30 AM
many congrats on your win Carrie:-) hugs jan x
Jones Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 7:18 AM
Very nice.congratulations Carrie
Mehta Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 4:20 AM
I enjoyed the beautiful imagery in the poem, congrats on the win, Carrie
A. Sharma Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 2:08 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Carrie !
Kayode Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 12:53 AM
This tops my table and enlarges my Fav,I so much love the verse two "...then staggers back...,congrats on the win Carrie...huggs
Williams Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 6:04 AM
Hello Carrie, I like the flow and vision...
Petersen Potter Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 9:03 PM
Nice penned verses Carrie dear friend! GL in contest! xxxD.
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