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in this whirlwind world pay the toll shaken the soul once more and again

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Date: 10/14/2022 11:56:00 AM
Love the alliteration in the first line. Picture and your poem go together nicely. Last line brings the thought home!
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Date: 10/14/2022 11:56:00 AM
Indeed it does. Well written Sotto :)
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Date: 10/14/2022 11:40:00 AM
- yes, shakes the soul ... over and over again, Las - Great haiku :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs
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