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Chaos In Motion

Spinning, crashing, losing sight
Whirling, flying, feeling tight
Hurling, rolling, gripping bite
Some things you can not change in fight

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/12/2014 7:38:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Stephen - I choose your first poem and hope you will write many more in the future - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too. - PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone.(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - <3 from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 1/12/2014 4:03:00 AM

Stephen, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Stephen Honor
Date: 1/12/2014 5:05:00 AM

I'm 25, living in north west England, and never wrote poetry until yesterday! Thank you for the comment

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/11/2014 11:35:00 PM

Hi Stephen, I like your first poetic piece on the site , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Stephen Honor
Date: 1/12/2014 5:04:00 AM

Thank you! This is actually my first poem ever. I saw this site and decided to write a bit of poetry , now I've wrote a bunch more since then and I love it!

Chaos In Motion

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