Alexis Y. Poet Verse

Chaos and Order- Tormented

My head hurts really bad, it's much turmoil in my mind
I don't know what’s real or fake, I long for peace
Some days I’m really scared like someone is chasing me 
Everything is jumbled and mixed up, I want to be free

 I take what the doctor prescribed and I wait
It takes a while for me to feel somewhat better
When it kicks in my life is tolerable, it has order 








Inspired by Nette's Contest: Choas And Order

1-28-17

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Winged Warrior February 2, 2017 at 2:28 PM Congrats!!! Alexis...a 'chaos' of the mind...most frightening...very well done...god bless...^WW^

Teddy Kimathi February 1, 2017 at 5:43 PM I enjoyed reading your deep verse, Alexis. Congrats for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-)

Shilpa Chaganti February 1, 2017 at 1:03 PM Kudos on the win.. :) Alexis The relief after the tormenting pain is so much relatable...

Nette Onclaud February 1, 2017 at 12:57 PM a realistic look at emotional disruption which finds comfort through health care... great artwords, alexis...cheers to you on your win and thanks for coming around.. huggs Alexis Y. February 1, 2017 at 2:49 PM Hi Nette, It was my pleasure to participate in your contest. Thanks for my placement:-) Alexis

Joseph May February 1, 2017 at 9:51 AM Congrats on your win Alexis Alexis Y. February 1, 2017 at 12:50 PM Hi Joseph, Thanks for coming by to congratulate me. Congratulations to you too:-) Alexis

Richard Lamoureux January 31, 2017 at 11:02 PM Great take on the contest. Congrats. Alexis Y. February 1, 2017 at 12:51 PM Hi Richard, Thanks for coming by to congratulate me. Congratulations on your top win:-) Alexis

Freddie Robinson Jr. January 30, 2017 at 5:22 PM A cool anti-everyone-gets-a-trophy poem, Alexis. A nice kick-in-the-head when those meds kick in. Sometimes, pain is a person's portion of living. Pray to God that He gives you a high tolerance threshold for pain. This poem is a 7 and a fave. Cool double combo for this tasty treat. Love and more love to you, dear.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri January 30, 2017 at 11:55 AM Yes life has both chaos and order as this poem combines the hard times with the better positively and sighing at the same time. Thumbs up for how u express it. That should cheer up. Nice to read from your pen again , I hope u will too my latest. And hapy new yr.

Chris Green January 30, 2017 at 11:00 AM This one hurt to read my friend. Though, form what I know about the contest, it seems perfect to me for the theme because it cries loudly of chaos but finds peace when order is restored. Good luck Alexis.

Demetrios Trifiatis January 30, 2017 at 5:49 AM Dramatic but beautifully done dear, Alexis! A big seven!

Joseph May January 28, 2017 at 1:52 PM Very nicely penned Alexis...best wishes

Winged Warrior January 28, 2017 at 1:26 PM Everyone has his or her 'Heavens and Hells' of mind...hopefully, yours leans more toward the Heavens...great write Alexis...god bless my friend...^WW^

Andrea Dietrich January 28, 2017 at 11:59 AM This is a good contrast you came up with. I have no clue how to do this theme. But I better get my thinking cap on.GREAT job, Alexis. Good luck in the contest.

Tim Smith January 28, 2017 at 11:55 AM I pray things will be clearer for you...Lovely verse