Chantilly Morning

Gossamer
morning mist
vanishes

Ancient sun
shimmering
welcoming

Filigree
embellished
aurora

Chantilly
laced silence
awakens

Crystalline
dew sweetened
surprises  

Meadowlark's
exquisite
melody

Delicate
violet
carnival

Pomander 
lavender
fragrances

Soft velvet
Mossy wet
coverlets

Green clover
slipper soft
carpeting


Catharsis
of the soul
transcending



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Inspired by the "Ellip" Contest...sponsored by Gigno
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Williams Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 1:18 PM
Carrie belated congrats on your win...David
Squyres Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 8:10 AM
The Title fits so well !!! Love this !! Congrats on your placement !!
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 5:44 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful ellip! Lori
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 2:01 AM
Congrats on your HM Carrie , I am envious of all those that tried this and placed xx
Haick Avatar
March 4, 2013 at 11:46 AM
Congratulations on a fine win, Carrie. Love, Annalise
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March 4, 2013 at 10:12 AM
Carrie, this is a very nice and awesome win... always~ LINDA
Gildersleeve Avatar
March 4, 2013 at 7:12 AM
Sweet! Congrats on your win. Connie
Mannan Avatar
March 3, 2013 at 9:58 PM
Warmest congrats on this super win Carrie
Gigno Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 9:02 PM
!!!
Duncan Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 10:50 PM
love the way you did this,, I need to write in this fashion,,, thumbs up for a win ;}
Kendrick Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 6:14 AM
Very expressive work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sure to be in the winners' list..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments always encourage..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2013 at 10:51 PM
geeez, Carrie, yours is about the third or fourth one I have seen that uses many ellips to create a stunning portrait of something beautiful. Mine is so simple. Just one line across. I'll be lucky to get an HM. haha. Love this.
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