Get Your Premium Membership

Chantilly Morning

Gossamer
morning mist
vanishes

Ancient sun
shimmering
welcoming

Filigree
embellished
aurora

Chantilly
laced silence
awakens

Crystalline
dew sweetened
surprises  

Meadowlark's
exquisite
melody

Delicate
violet
carnival

Pomander 
lavender
fragrances

Soft velvet
Mossy wet
coverlets

Green clover
slipper soft
carpeting


Catharsis
of the soul
transcending



_________________________________
Inspired by the "Ellip" Contest...sponsored by Gigno

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/7/2013 1:18:00 PM
Carrie belated congrats on your win...David
Login to Reply
Date: 3/5/2013 8:10:00 AM
The Title fits so well !!! Love this !! Congrats on your placement !!
Login to Reply
Date: 3/5/2013 5:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful ellip! Lori
Login to Reply
Date: 3/5/2013 2:01:00 AM
Congrats on your HM Carrie , I am envious of all those that tried this and placed xx
Login to Reply
Date: 3/4/2013 11:46:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine win, Carrie. Love, Annalise
Login to Reply
Date: 3/4/2013 10:12:00 AM
Carrie, this is a very nice and awesome win... always~ LINDA
Login to Reply
Date: 3/4/2013 7:12:00 AM
Sweet! Congrats on your win. Connie
Login to Reply
Date: 3/3/2013 9:58:00 PM
Warmest congrats on this super win Carrie
Login to Reply
Date: 2/28/2013 9:02:00 PM
!!!
Login to Reply
Date: 2/21/2013 10:50:00 PM
love the way you did this,, I need to write in this fashion,,, thumbs up for a win ;}
Login to Reply
Date: 2/21/2013 6:14:00 AM
Very expressive work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sure to be in the winners' list..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments always encourage..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 2/20/2013 10:51:00 PM
geeez, Carrie, yours is about the third or fourth one I have seen that uses many ellips to create a stunning portrait of something beautiful. Mine is so simple. Just one line across. I'll be lucky to get an HM. haha. Love this.
Login to Reply

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry