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Changing Ways

Changing Ways Changing old ways and changing old style Leading you to think rather than just smile Sending swimming daggers into your brain Your body shivers as soaked in a cold rain The lights ooze and bleed ever deeper into you Misery emerges and you know you got your due Hurting from stonedead feet to pounding head Finding wisdom in the newly born words read Aching pain given only to reward great relief Then you will know great truth and find belief Gone are the pleas once enslaving body and soul Revelation in kind guides into a saving goal Words slash, blast and invincibly take measure Bringing forth knowledge's greatest treasure Change your ways, change your style Celebrate and reward with a brilliant smile .. Tyr- 05-03 2014

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Date: 5/6/2014 9:37:00 AM
Sounds like a call for repentance in non-religious terms. Nice write.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/2/2014 6:37:00 PM
Thanks Mark.....
Date: 5/5/2014 9:22:00 AM
As we change we must remember to keep what was good of the old.. Cast away the bad...
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