Changing the Mind's Diaper

"Cut that crap out" says hemisphere left to right sending cerebrums cavorting minding thoughts contrite siding best scrape away that sludge grudge and blight seeing changing the mind's diaper gives a clogged mind fresh sight 18.04.14 Composed for John Lawless' Changing The Diaper Of The Mind

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Roy Pett

Date: 4/16/2018 3:57:00 PM

Brilliant Maureen, such a cleverly written poem, great rhyme, good luck in contest. :))

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/16/2018 7:33:00 PM

Thank you Roy! I got kick out of it ;) xomo!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/15/2018 10:34:00 PM

Muse activated and fired on all cylinders, Maureen. I was going to enter this contest, maybe, but you've garnered all the prize money with this one. (Leave us poor sparrows a dime or two next time, would you?!). I'll 'lay down the law to John'** if he doesn't go for this one. :) gw **Kidding, of course, but only about the 'laying down the law' part // just word-playing there. First comments stand tall and proud

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/16/2018 6:52:00 AM

The battle of the frontal lobes, you are a dear! No bribing the judge now. I hope he likes it :) Thank you my friend xomo!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/14/2018 5:08:00 PM

fabulous rhyme and i love that final stanza oh so true Mo, so few words says so much and your poem packs a powerful punch:-) hugs jan xx

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/14/2018 9:12:00 PM

Thank you so much Jan! I wanted to write for this one, my muse finally sparked, I'm tickled with the result :) xomo!