Changing of the Guard

Amber is the dawn
                        In the quiet comes to call
                                                         Stars have gone to sleep
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Devonshire Avatar
September 6, 2010 at 4:09 PM
I like the analogy, day ushering in as the "Changing of the Guard," Deb. Terrific haiku! Love, Carolyn
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September 6, 2010 at 8:21 AM
A very nice haiku with fine images, Deb
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September 6, 2010 at 7:13 AM
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September 6, 2010 at 7:12 AM
A beautifuk Haiku Deb ! A nice lil' whisper to share with my Noah ! ty james
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