Carol Mitra Poet Couplet

Changing - Me

Would you put me under a spell
If I crawled under a shell

Would you try to break it
Or put me back inside a pit

Would you give me time
Or is that such a crime

Would you show me the whole universe
Or only the lines that you rehearse

Would you try to shape me
Or let me lie comfortably.

07.12.2020
Couplets.

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Sam Kauffman December 7, 2020 at 1:21 PM I really like your open-ended questions Carol. They make for a profound poem with much between the lines to ponder. Congratulations on your win of "wondering." Carol Mitra December 7, 2020 at 6:40 PM Thanks dear Sam...yes I meant it to be thought provoking.

Frances Schiavina December 7, 2020 at 10:55 AM Congratulations on inspiring well thought poem. Carol Mitra December 7, 2020 at 6:39 PM Thank you Frances...much appreciated.

David Kavanagh December 7, 2020 at 5:57 AM A lot of big questions here Carol, that you seem to answer yourself, and good for you, make one’s own destiny where possible, congratulations on your thought provoking winner cheers David Carol Mitra December 7, 2020 at 6:38 PM Thanks David....much appreciated.

Supraja Kannan December 7, 2020 at 5:06 AM This is so beautiful, Carol... Congratulations on your well deserved win... Carol Mitra December 7, 2020 at 5:21 AM Thanks Supraja....Regards.