Changing Faces

"Changing Faces" she stole my beau in Italy when we were both quite young, a flower 'twas waiting to bloom; a love song left unsung, she weaved her magic spell on him with her soft feminine wiles, her grand manipulation proved a master of disguise in smiles, she selfishly thought of herself and crushed my broken heart, in Italy, we had laughed and cried and suddenly grew apart, throughout those years I wanted to return for sweet revenge, because my first love was my life; I wished hers to unhinge, instead, I wrote a little note, sent with a basket of cheer, remember KARMA comes around; kiss my petunia, dear. startled, she picked up the phone to thank me for the gift, she now was a changed woman, who understood how swift the hand of Fate; passing of Time, can instill in a heart, compassion and forgiveness as maturity did start she offered invitation to visit our old stomping grounds, burying the hatchet among familiar sights and sounds, she was an excellent hostess, who cherished me as a friend, her beautiful persona moved me to make amends, so once a year we meet in love, enjoying family, for nothing can replace a true friendship's harmony. *For Vienna's Let Me Have It .. then Kiss My Petunia eeContest.
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A  Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 2:31 AM
love this one... ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~
Dietrich Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 12:01 AM
Your entry was awesome, Linda. Big congrats in the contest!!
A   Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 8:20 AM
HI LINDA MY SWEET BFF,,, , congratulations in Vienna Bombardieri "Let me have it then kiss my petunia" INTERESTING contest... TAKE CARE :-) Love PD. ..... thank you for my birthday wishes.. I will celebrate my birthday this October 7th... xox~ pd
Sweetheart Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 7:53 AM
won 2nd place .. thankxxx
Brown Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 5:32 AM
Congratulations on your win in Vienna's contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 4:27 AM
Another wonderful win for you Linda with this beauty. Big Congrats and hugs.
Kovrlija Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 2:38 AM
I enjoyed reading this poem!
Macfarlane Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 3:57 PM
Remarkable write...I enjoyed reading this immensely! Hugs
Cavanaugh Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 10:18 PM
I love the rhyme. I especially love your euphemism "kiss my petunia" so clever. Love your poem
Wellington Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 10:32 PM
An out standing write for a super win.. best wishes Linda for this contest and Thanks a lot for visiting and your sweet comments.
Devnath  Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 7:20 AM
The last line is challenging line concluded with few words. I think in the same way. Good luck. Loved always, bl
Dietrich Avatar
September 11, 2012 at 9:57 PM
wow, Linda, you did outstandingly with this theme. you made it into a story. how wonderful.
Horsman Avatar
September 11, 2012 at 8:42 AM
Oh Sweetheart, this just gets better and better, your such an inspiration, a true Goddess of poetry, a person one day i would love to meet!!!!!!!!!!
A   Avatar
September 10, 2012 at 9:04 PM
Linda, my sweet Bff... thank you so much for your lovely visit. your poem really hits... good luck in the contest..xox~pd
Arowolo Avatar
September 10, 2012 at 5:58 PM
Nice and beautiful piece,Linda..most suitable for the contest...Winning hugs to you,great friend...Bravo...
Onclaud Avatar
September 10, 2012 at 12:55 PM
i enjoyed how you kicked then kissed this piece with your interesting story, sweets.. it's a wonder how you can place yourself in such extremes and write with such ease... wowie win for me! ..:) huggs!
Sivey Avatar
September 10, 2012 at 12:18 PM
You've done a masterful job with this magnificent write my friend! I truly love the way you approached the contest Linda-Marie...I've been debating on how to do this contest, I'm just not a mean person so I would have a hard time letting her have it! So I've put this one off for fear of hurting her feelings...and hurting my own in doing so! Well, I believe you've accomplished her wishes quite well with this perfect poem! This is a wondrous write, one that will do well in the contest! Great Work!
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September 10, 2012 at 11:00 AM
A perfect entry for Vie's contest, Linda-Marie! I, too, decided I could not let Vie have it. She's too sweet! I probably won't enter her contest unless I come up with another way. Yours is brilliant! Hugs, Rhonda
Andresen Avatar
September 10, 2012 at 10:53 AM
You always have something "in wait" or is it "thinking hat" you put on. Like this very much Linda-Marie - Good luck in the contest for you. Good friends are irreplaceable - - Have a exciting NEW week. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Bauer Avatar
September 10, 2012 at 9:58 AM
ha! very sweet revenge, indeed! i hope she got what she deserved. excellent poem!
Sweetheart Avatar
September 10, 2012 at 9:58 AM
posting 2nd half shortly .. a tough contest as Vie is a sweet lady to write nasty lines about so thought this love rivalry would be cute .. enjoy poets ..luv
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