Changes For Better Or Worse

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Going to exercise aerobic Walk on treadmill everyday Reduce foods too caloric Get in shape in everyway Work on personality increase to dynamic And do a little everyday Keep mouth closed not fanatic Gain friends~influence people always Let my tongue's speech be sweet not caustic Bite my tongue when want unkindness to say Let love and kindness become chronic Elastic tongue keep strapped down come what may Looked up 7 syllables words that rhyme on the internet and then tried to write a poem using them.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/22/2024 2:09:00 PM

What a fun/creative write. Great Pictures... They made it look so easy. Love your ending. The tongue is a trouble maker... I Have a fun/creative fun day writing away.......

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/22/2024 2:39:00 PM

Yes, I agree that exercise looks easy as long as another is doing the work. Thanks for dropping by my page, Paula. I appreciate you taking the time to comment. Sara K

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/21/2024 6:22:00 PM

I admire that line, 'Let love and kindness become chronic.' These are the right kind of 'chronicles!' :) Gershon

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/21/2024 10:47:00 PM

You saw right through me, Gershon. Yes, love and kindness should be life choices. I like the use of Chronicles. Sara K

Paige Hind

Date: 7/21/2024 2:58:00 PM

So cute! And your words ring true! Enjoyed reading- :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/21/2024 10:46:00 PM

Thank you, Paige. Change is not easy, but it definitely can be beneficial. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 7/21/2024 7:35:00 AM

Youve written my thoughts exactly dear sara! The opening lines, haha i want to do all that but migraines keep me from doing all that. And that gif is funny! So cute! Well written and delivered, pleasure reading your work always, sending you light

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/21/2024 7:40:00 AM

Why, thank you, I E. I appreciate the visit and kind review. I can imagine that migraine headaches would be awful. Sara K

Yann Rolland

Date: 7/21/2024 5:41:00 AM

so courageous to do that kind of work, but good shape is precious even for the mind, enjoyed your beautiful poem

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/21/2024 7:13:00 AM

Thank you, Yann. The exercise is not happening here. LOL..Thanks for stopping by. Sara K