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Image result for pictures of cartoon women working out trying to get fitAfter ~~   Yeah!!  Right!Image result for pictures of cartoon women working out trying to get fit

Changes For Better Or Worse

Going to exercise aerobic Walk on treadmill everyday Reduce foods too caloric Get in shape in everyway Work on personality increase to dynamic And do a little everyday Keep mouth closed not fanatic Gain friends~influence people always Let my tongue's speech be sweet not caustic Bite my tongue when want unkindness to say Let love and kindness become chronic Elastic tongue keep strapped down come what may
Looked up 7 syllables words that rhyme on the internet and then tried to write a poem using them.
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Goldsmith Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 2:09 PM
What a fun/creative write. Great Pictures... They made it look so easy. Love your ending. The tongue is a trouble maker... I Have a fun/creative fun day writing away.......
Kendrick Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 2:39 PM
Yes, I agree that exercise looks easy as long as another is doing the work. Thanks for dropping by my page, Paula. I appreciate you taking the time to comment. Sara K
Wolf Avatar
July 21, 2024 at 6:22 PM
I admire that line, 'Let love and kindness become chronic.' These are the right kind of 'chronicles!' :) Gershon
Kendrick Avatar
July 21, 2024 at 10:47 PM
You saw right through me, Gershon. Yes, love and kindness should be life choices. I like the use of Chronicles. Sara K
Hind Avatar
July 21, 2024 at 2:58 PM
So cute! And your words ring true! Enjoyed reading- :)
Kendrick Avatar
July 21, 2024 at 10:46 PM
Thank you, Paige. Change is not easy, but it definitely can be beneficial. Sara K
Empress Avatar
July 21, 2024 at 7:35 AM
Youve written my thoughts exactly dear sara! The opening lines, haha i want to do all that but migraines keep me from doing all that. And that gif is funny! So cute! Well written and delivered, pleasure reading your work always, sending you light
Kendrick Avatar
July 21, 2024 at 7:40 AM
Why, thank you, I E. I appreciate the visit and kind review. I can imagine that migraine headaches would be awful. Sara K
Rolland Avatar
July 21, 2024 at 5:41 AM
so courageous to do that kind of work, but good shape is precious even for the mind, enjoyed your beautiful poem
Kendrick Avatar
July 21, 2024 at 7:13 AM
Thank you, Yann. The exercise is not happening here. LOL..Thanks for stopping by. Sara K
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