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As the waves calmly roll to the shore
Angels fly above searching for more,
The Ocean sends off a spectacular glisten
Silence is golden, close your eyes and just listen...
The sound of a gentle breeze
flowing through our minds with ease,
As time seems to just sit still
there is peace and harmony you can truly feel...
Not a worry in the world to wonder
no storms nor rain,
No not even thunder...
Living in a life of hopes and dreams,
not a problem in the world
so it seems..
Unprepared for what will soon arise,
The Ocean rumbles as the Angels cry...
Fierce and Furious and full of rage,
Just as a Lion chambered in his cage...
With the strength of 10,000 men,
I'm dazed and confused 
and don't know where to begin...
Life seems to have just crumbled 
My hopes and dreams together have tumbled,
Will I ever live the life of the sane,
or continue living on a dragons mane...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 10, 2010 at 11:17 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Edward. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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September 23, 2010 at 10:26 PM
Edward, Congratulations! On having your poem featured this week. A poem well deserved, keep the fascinating poetry coming" Nathan D.
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September 23, 2010 at 11:38 AM
Edward, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.
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September 21, 2010 at 11:14 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Edward. Love, Carol
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May 19, 2010 at 4:38 PM
Nice use of imagery to share your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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May 18, 2010 at 11:52 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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May 17, 2010 at 5:33 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Edward. Love, Carol
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May 16, 2010 at 9:37 PM
Congrats Edward on your featured poem this week on the Soup... great choice... with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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May 16, 2010 at 1:20 PM
LOVELY WRITE, BIG CONGRATS ON YOUR FEATURE ON THE FRONT PAGE, HOPE YOU GET A CHANCE TO STOP BY AND CHECK OUT MY BLOG, S.K.A.T.
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