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After the intensity of our relationship -  the heady feeling of being wanted - the silence kills me. I struggle to stay sane, to understand why she never calls me now. No, she won't phone again... written 18th September for Emile's Yalto contest

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Date: 10/1/2019 11:36:00 AM
This has such a natural effortless flow. Very well done. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/30/2019 6:55:00 PM
The pain is felt intensely through your words...nice write. Congrats on your top placement
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Date: 9/30/2019 6:54:00 PM
The pain is felt intensely through your words...nice write. Congrats on your top placement
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Date: 9/30/2019 1:04:00 PM
How did I miss this beauty? Congrats on a well-deserved win, Jack!:-)
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Date: 9/30/2019 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations Jack, your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, it was a very tough contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 9/25/2019 7:30:00 AM
Resigned to life without her...and yet the feeling of longing lingers. Regards, my friend // paul
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Date: 9/24/2019 1:00:00 PM
Ahhh!! Sad..Sara
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Date: 9/18/2019 8:20:00 PM
This is a wonderful entry to the contest. I hope it places highly. Blessings to you
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Date: 9/18/2019 4:24:00 PM
Love this poem..I can picture this situation..Silence is indeed the worst enemy.. sad and powerful feeling of rejection in this poem.
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Date: 9/18/2019 2:40:00 PM
Powerful emotion well suited to the form. Superbly penned, Jack.
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