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"Children begin by loving their parents; as they grow older
                 they judge them; sometimes they forgive them."
                                     Quote by _Oscar Wilde

We had only one hero: father; heroine: mother!
We had two models; Except for them, there was no other!
They gave us food, housing, shelter, health, wealth, and merriment,
Like the kind earth, they gave themselves for our experiment...!

They took us to temple and gurdwara and mosque and church,
They sent us to school, and showed us the way of wisdom search;
As long as they filled us with good things, we found them the best,
As we gained newer knowledge we felt ourselves more blessed...!

We felt as proud as peacocks; we found their faces fading,
We knew working for our sake, fatigue on their face shading;
We found them as flowers of yesterday, less glamorous,
We knew it was futility to make them rapturous...!

Whatsoever they said or did, we felt as though big faults,
We felt ashamed of their participation in our waltz;
We just bore them and gave them a place to quietly hide,
Do we watch our kids watching us, who'd take us for a ride...???


27 May 2023

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 5/27/2023 3:04:00 PM
What a thoughtful poem! My parents were far more loving to all, than I ever will be. Kind is not big enough. Compassionate and extremely generous to all. My daughter is grown with family. She knows we did for her the best we could. We are both like sisters,she writes here as well. We both took care of my Mom for eight years till she died,. I can’t drive anymore..my daughter drives me around. she is a blessing to her family and to this country,))Be a pattern for your great kids,Pangie
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/28/2023 3:42:00 PM
Keep writing yes, yes’s, come what may, you have an prinakty all your own, Pangie xx
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/27/2023 8:31:00 PM
Thank you very much for reading my work and making such a very elaborate and beautiful comment. Your comment has encouraged me very much. Glad to know about your family. May God Bless You all!
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