Chandelier Versus Ember

Chandelier versus ember


                             Chandelier 
                     Aureate,  resplendent
            Swinging, glistening, attracting
           A steady hope; A crushed dream
                  Burning, defeating, fading
                              Dark , dull
                                 Ember
 


                   © Anulaxmi Nayak,2015
                        14th September2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kendrick Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 1:11 PM
Good job doing this Diamante...I enjoyed reading it today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Nayak Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 2:04 AM
Dear Sara , thank you for your appreciative words:-) I feel honoured:-)thanks again,.....love,Anu:-)
Trifiatis Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 12:30 PM
Oh, that is a beauty, my dearest, Anulaxmi! First time and first medal! Bravo! A seven!
Nayak Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 2:03 AM
Dear Demetrios , thank you for your appreciative words:-) I feel honoured:-)thanks again,.....love,Anu:-)
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