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Chandelier To Enchant

Chandelier To Enchant

         from ceiling above
         at central hall of my house
         hanging charming chandelier 

        me to watch at lazy noon
        of sunny weekend
        sun rays entering through glasses 


       splitting in sparkling spectrum 
       displaying dazzling designs
       on walls and ceiling 


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12/13/22

Triple New Charlieku 3 


Contest by Charles Messina

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 1/5/2023 10:03:00 AM
That was a very interesting take on the theme. Way to go, Anisha
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Date: 1/5/2023 7:03:00 AM
So well done, Anisha. Simply beautiful. Your win is well-deserved. Congratulations
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Date: 1/5/2023 4:45:00 AM
A nicely done crystal clear penning, Anisha, my compliments on your win, Aloha William
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Date: 1/5/2023 3:54:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 1/4/2023 9:11:00 PM
"displaying dazzling designs" - Beautiful scene and alliteration. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/4/2023 7:52:00 PM
Very nice imagery, Anisha. Congrats on your win! Happy New Year! Charlie
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