Chandelier To Enchant

Chandelier To Enchant

         from ceiling above
         at central hall of my house
         hanging charming chandelier 

        me to watch at lazy noon
        of sunny weekend
        sun rays entering through glasses 


       splitting in sparkling spectrum 
       displaying dazzling designs
       on walls and ceiling 


 5-7-7.    7-5-7.     7-7-5

12/13/22

Triple New Charlieku 3 


Contest by Charles Messina
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Dietrich Avatar
January 5, 2023 at 10:03 AM
That was a very interesting take on the theme. Way to go, Anisha
Poet Avatar
January 5, 2023 at 7:03 AM
So well done, Anisha. Simply beautiful. Your win is well-deserved. Congratulations
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 5, 2023 at 4:45 AM
A nicely done crystal clear penning, Anisha, my compliments on your win, Aloha William
Kendrick Avatar
January 5, 2023 at 3:54 AM
Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara
Alex Avatar
January 4, 2023 at 9:11 PM
"displaying dazzling designs" - Beautiful scene and alliteration. Congratulations!
Messina Avatar
January 4, 2023 at 7:52 PM
Very nice imagery, Anisha. Congrats on your win! Happy New Year! Charlie
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