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Chances Are

chances are two strangers cannot keep their eyes off each other love at first sight? can happen sometimes love does not blossom for time is not right? life can give a second chance 8/22/21 Submitted Bite Size Poem No 18 Poetry Line Gauthier 7/14/21 Ni (2) Katuata Poetry William Kekaula

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Line Gauthier

Date: 8/9/2021 10:49:00 AM

well penned ~

Marilene Evans
Date: 8/9/2021 11:40:00 AM

Thank you, Line.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/19/2021 10:27:00 AM

This is wonderful Marilene. I especially love the second stanza on second chances. We have friends who dated in high school, went their separate ways then found each other again. Congratulations on your win! Blessings my friend.

Marilene Evans
Date: 7/19/2021 11:25:00 AM

Thanks so much, Sam. I wish it could happen to me. I really kind of wrote that wishing it would happen to me, lol. Have a blessed day.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/17/2021 1:25:00 PM

My newest poem tells of a second chance too! Very nice! Congratulations!

Marilene Evans
Date: 7/17/2021 1:34:00 PM

Thanks, Kim. Have a great day.

Carol Louise Moon

Date: 7/17/2021 11:42:00 AM

Very nice, Marilene. Congratulations on your win!

Marilene Evans
Date: 7/17/2021 11:47:00 AM

Thank you so much, Carol Have a great week-end.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/17/2021 10:11:00 AM

Yes it can, beautiful expressions , Congrats

Marilene Evans
Date: 7/17/2021 10:37:00 AM

Thanks so much. Have a nice week-end.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/17/2021 12:25:00 AM

Beautifully composed. I tried. Could not. Congratulations!

Marilene Evans
Date: 7/17/2021 10:37:00 AM

Thanks, Christuraj. Have a great week-end.

Hilo Poet

Date: 7/16/2021 11:16:00 PM

I have a long list of friends that fits this narrative, tho' I lucked out. Nicely done, Marilene, messages are remarkably defining. My compliments on your winning placement my friend, Aloha!

Hilo Poet
Date: 7/17/2021 5:29:00 PM

Another <|:( bites the ...

Marilene Evans
Date: 7/17/2021 10:36:00 AM

Thank you. Thank you for my placement and the compliment. I gave somebody a second chance, even a third one, STRIKE....out of my radar.... LOL

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/15/2021 7:04:00 AM

I have seen both happen. All the best for contest

Marilene Evans
Date: 7/15/2021 7:44:00 AM

Thanks, Rama. You have a good night.