Marilene Evans Poet Haiku

Chances Are

chances are

two strangers cannot
keep their eyes off each other
love at first sight? can happen

sometimes love does not
blossom for time is not right?
life can give a second chance


8/22/21    Submitted Bite Size Poem No 18 Poetry
                Line Gauthier


7/14/21    Ni (2) Katuata Poetry
                William Kekaula

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Line Gauthier August 9, 2021 at 10:49 AM well penned ~ Marilene Evans August 9, 2021 at 11:40 AM Thank you, Line.

Sam Kauffman July 19, 2021 at 10:27 AM This is wonderful Marilene. I especially love the second stanza on second chances. We have friends who dated in high school, went their separate ways then found each other again. Congratulations on your win! Blessings my friend. Marilene Evans July 19, 2021 at 11:25 AM Thanks so much, Sam. I wish it could happen to me. I really kind of wrote that wishing it would happen to me, lol. Have a blessed day.

Kim Rodrigues July 17, 2021 at 1:25 PM My newest poem tells of a second chance too! Very nice! Congratulations! Marilene Evans July 17, 2021 at 1:34 PM Thanks, Kim. Have a great day.

Mystic Rose Rose July 17, 2021 at 10:11 AM Yes it can, beautiful expressions , Congrats Marilene Evans July 17, 2021 at 10:37 AM Thanks so much. Have a nice week-end.

Christuraj Alex July 17, 2021 at 12:25 AM Beautifully composed. I tried. Could not. Congratulations! Marilene Evans July 17, 2021 at 10:37 AM Thanks, Christuraj. Have a great week-end.

William Kelii Kekaula July 16, 2021 at 11:16 PM I have a long list of friends that fits this narrative, tho' I lucked out. Nicely done, Marilene, messages are remarkably defining. My compliments on your winning placement my friend, Aloha! William Kelii Kekaula July 17, 2021 at 5:29 PM Another <|:( bites the ... Marilene Evans July 17, 2021 at 10:36 AM Thank you. Thank you for my placement and the compliment. I gave somebody a second chance, even a third one, STRIKE....out of my radar.... LOL

Rama Balasubramanian July 15, 2021 at 7:04 AM I have seen both happen. All the best for contest Marilene Evans July 15, 2021 at 7:44 AM Thanks, Rama. You have a good night.