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Champagne Lady Ii

Conflicting waves ruffle the smooth blue static
hindering the ethereal progression of her path
Airiness sinks heavily to lean into leaden aqua
mistiness lingering, a foggy dolorous  requiem
Practical currents, seem to have lost their step
as winds gust, only to die in competing dogma
Gone again are the gains to the losses gaining!
New rules implemented o’er the old as the sun
explicitly highlights flaws within its blared flare

Listless and restless tossing of the weary soul
aspiring to stay afloat in a much bouncier sea
Denying the salty sting, sways ‘long the bend
yielding painfully to a slower, upriver, journey

6/23/23
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ashley Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 9:38 AM
Dear Susan, nobody composes double acrostics as deftly as you do, and surely, nobody creates imagery as beautifully as you do. Your finesse with with creating enchanting poetry never fails to amaze and mesmerize me. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Ashley Avatar
August 12, 2023 at 10:16 AM
lol! Thanks numero uno Susan! :))
Woodrow Avatar
August 12, 2023 at 10:13 AM
Thank you very much #1 Susan … :)
Richards Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 9:54 AM
Ah, you never disappoint. Loved this :) How are you?
Woodrow Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 10:01 AM
Thank you! Been a super-busy summer so far and just trying to keep up! :)
Nicholsen Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 7:14 PM
enjoyed reading your work
Woodrow Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 8:32 AM
Glad to hear that, Yolanda… thank you :)
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