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Champagne Lady Ii

Conflicting waves ruffle the smooth blue static hindering the ethereal progression of her path Airiness sinks heavily to lean into leaden aqua mistiness lingering, a foggy dolorous requiem Practical currents, seem to have lost their step as winds gust, only to die in competing dogma Gone again are the gains to the losses gaining! New rules implemented o’er the old as the sun explicitly highlights flaws within its blared flare Listless and restless tossing of the weary soul aspiring to stay afloat in a much bouncier sea Denying the salty sting, sways ‘long the bend yielding painfully to a slower, upriver, journey 6/23/23

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Date: 8/10/2023 9:38:00 AM
Dear Susan, nobody composes double acrostics as deftly as you do, and surely, nobody creates imagery as beautifully as you do. Your finesse with with creating enchanting poetry never fails to amaze and mesmerize me. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 8/12/2023 10:16:00 AM
lol! Thanks numero uno Susan! :))
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 8/12/2023 10:13:00 AM
Thank you very much #1 Susan … :)
Date: 8/8/2023 9:54:00 AM
Ah, you never disappoint. Loved this :) How are you?
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 8/8/2023 10:01:00 AM
Thank you! Been a super-busy summer so far and just trying to keep up! :)
Date: 8/7/2023 7:14:00 PM
enjoyed reading your work
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 8/8/2023 8:32:00 AM
Glad to hear that, Yolanda… thank you :)
Date: 7/27/2023 1:12:00 PM
Now this ain't yer average acrostic Susie. Nice one
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 7/27/2023 2:46:00 PM
Thank you Tom… good to see you back :)

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