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Champagne Is The Savior Of Man

Pregnant sky labors in misty cloud Tenants of earth awaits the bath of life Warrant is issued to eastern wind Stagnant is earth and man's thrive Rain now patters in Noah's days fashion Vein shivers as cold infiltrates man Pain enslave the worried thought and soul Champagne is the savior of man For Rick Praise's lento contest

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Date: 7/28/2011 1:37:00 PM
wine is truly soothing, joseph...some biblical tones here; so impressive with winning wishes! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 7/27/2011 10:18:00 PM
Quite interesting imagery again in this poem, Joseph. Thinking outside the box. Rick is sure to be pleased!
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Date: 7/27/2011 9:24:00 PM
Lovely write in this new form, yes agree it's good if taken in limited quantity, Joseph
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Date: 7/27/2011 9:49:00 AM
The title is paradoxical!. It means that alcohol is of great of help when cold grind man.thank you for reading
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