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Chained

Release me from the chain's which you have wrapped around my life Allow me to breathe once again and to feel what it is like to own my own body Provide me with the hope that my soul will one day listen to the cries of my heart and forgive you Emotionally I am broken because you touched me when you shouldn't have and didn't care that I didn't want you to but physically I walk around with a smile on my face as though I am happy to be alive.

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Bukiwe Tiyane

Date: 10/6/2016 10:46:00 AM

I just read all your poems :-) pretty good hey

Thandokazi Bangani
Date: 10/12/2016 10:23:00 AM

Thank you very much ????????xxxx

Skat A

Date: 9/19/2016 9:35:00 PM

Thandokazi Bangani, Georgie, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Thandokazi Bangani
Date: 9/19/2016 11:17:00 PM

Thank you Skat :) I'd love to be your poetry soup friend as well :) thanks for the warm welcome,it is much appreciated xxxx

Manmath Dalei

Date: 9/18/2016 9:10:00 PM

Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love

Thandokazi Bangani
Date: 9/18/2016 11:39:00 PM

Thank you very much Manmath really appreciate the positive feedback :) xxxx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/18/2016 7:49:00 AM

Uplifting end, Thankoazi Bangani, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Thandokazi Bangani
Date: 9/18/2016 9:02:00 AM

Thank you very much linda :) I'll be sure to read some of your poems as well xxx