Yanny Widjanarko Poet Rhyme

Chain of Guilty Room

Run and run 
Run away from the sun
The sun of pleasure and mourn which had done or undone

Teary, weary rain
Weary rain which washed me with this pain
Pain of bad dreams which get staging on its stain

Stuck in this guilty room
The room that freeze by the gloom
The gloom that lurks behind the luster of your bloom

Future never be
Never be like the things that we hope to see
That we hope to see for free

For everything happened with a price
A price that unable to be changed or even with our rights
Our rights which saved and sealed without a compromise 

For the life which stuck in a price

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Richard Lamoureux May 1, 2013 at 7:42 PM You captured the emotion well. This is a nice treat to read a new poem. Richard Lamoureux May 2, 2013 at 8:20 AM Sunny Okanagan day, on my way to work Yanny Widjanarko May 1, 2013 at 7:45 PM Hello Rick glad to see you around :D hope that you have a wonderful day there, and glad to have a comment by you :D hug, yanny

Poet Tacito April 29, 2013 at 1:25 PM Dark, yet astounding atmosphere. This was truly excellent! Life always has a price. Yanny Widjanarko May 1, 2013 at 10:40 AM sure life always has a price yet it is beautiful :) thank you Drake, your comment is really uplifting :) wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, yanny

Anne-Lise Andresen April 29, 2013 at 9:48 AM Yanny, my friend .... It is so sad ..... feels like you are so sorry ..... - A touching and well written poem. - Sending you a big hug / / Anne-Lise :) Yanny Widjanarko April 29, 2013 at 9:52 AM Sorry Anne I got switch suddenly while clicking the button, I don't know what brings me on this, it just flow right into my fingers :p wishing you a lovely Monday Anne, always be my pleasure to have a comment by you, hug, yanny Yanny Widjanarko April 29, 2013 at 9:49 AM Thank you Karen, glad to see your comment on this, it took me a longer time than usual to write on this one :D wishing you a wonderful day there, hug, yanny

Karen Anglesey April 29, 2013 at 9:42 AM WOW. This is rich with descriptions and deeply felt. HAve a beautiful day! Yanny Widjanarko April 29, 2013 at 9:49 AM Thank you Karen, glad to see your comment on this, it took me a longer time than usual to write on this one :D wishing you a wonderful day there, hug, yanny