Beryl Edmonds Poet Rhyme

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Written - 6th May 2024

 

Celestial Stars

Celestial stars in the sky appear
A faithful, exquisite crystal sphere
Visibly there for the world to scan
Created by the Miracle Man.

Angels of the night, dainty dancers
The light fandango for romancers
Stars are for lovers and dreamers too
In your eyes they’re twinkling just for you.

Stars are a wonder, gracing the night
Showcasing seraphic paradise
Should you find yourself lost and alone
Stars will guide you safely back to home.

Stars are made from God's Heavenly grace 
Meaning so much to those who have faith
Reach up and catch a bright falling star
Hold it close in heart where'er you are.

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Randy Freie May 20, 2024 at 3:03 AM Hi Beryl, being a great lover of stargazing myself, I can really relate to this poem. Like all life, as one star dies, another is born. The beauty lies in the creation. Beryl Edmonds May 20, 2024 at 4:11 PM Thank you Randy, stars are a beautiful creation, a super special sensation… Beryl

Panagiota Romios May 18, 2024 at 9:19 PM So beautiful Beryl Pangie Romios Beryl Edmonds May 18, 2024 at 11:49 PM Thank you Pangie, very much… Beryl

Andrea Dietrich May 14, 2024 at 4:14 PM Ahh this is so sweet. A real charmer, Beryl Beryl Edmonds May 14, 2024 at 4:39 PM Thank you Andrea… Beryl

Richard Lamoureux May 9, 2024 at 6:12 AM A lovely piece. Beryl Edmonds May 10, 2024 at 7:18 PM Thank you Richard… Beryl

Victor Buhagiar May 6, 2024 at 10:08 PM You remind me of my youth when hiking at night, we would study the Ursa minor. A lovely poem on the stars. Beryl Edmonds May 7, 2024 at 5:32 PM Thank you Victor, there’s something magical about a stroll beneath the stars and the moon at night. Blessings, Beryl

Vijay Pandit May 6, 2024 at 8:35 AM Delightfully dwelling in celestial wonder--much enjoyed the cosmic journey lauding paradise of stars. Excellent depiction, Beryl. Beryl Edmonds May 7, 2024 at 5:26 PM Thank you very much Vijay, so pleased you enjoyed the read. Beryl

Silent One May 6, 2024 at 7:08 AM A lovely poem.. Great flow as always.. Beryl Edmonds May 7, 2024 at 5:25 PM Thank you Silent One, appreciated as always.Beryl

Daniel Henry Rodgers May 6, 2024 at 5:27 AM Dear Beryl, What an enchanting allure of the celestial realm with such grace and reverence. I felt each stanza was like an invitation to gaze upon the heavens and find solace in their timeless beauty. I loved the celestial journey of faith and wonder. - Blessings, Daniel Beryl Edmonds May 7, 2024 at 5:23 PM Thank you Daniel, it’s wonderful to gaze up at the stars on a clear night and yes they do have timeless beauty. Blessings in return. Beryl