Panagiota Romios Poet Senryu

Celestial Kiss

            Rolling cloud slides tip
            We, on Milky Way's Starship
            Sparkling tender lips


      
                 September 5, 2020
                       7:30pm PST
 
     
     
         
            read at a classical poetry
            site that this form cannot
            only be capitalized....but
            also rhyme!
            Here's my first attempt*

  

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Darlene De Beaulieu September 7, 2020 at 2:59 PM Hello panagiota, oh-h-h---so romantic. Hugs Darlene. I felt the passion in this poem. xxxxx-oooooo Darlene De Beaulieu September 8, 2020 at 12:13 PM Hello Panagiota, oh- passion fired up this star ship.! Hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo Panagiota Romios September 7, 2020 at 6:50 PM Helli, Darlene! Right on! Passion fired this Starship.-)))) Love, Panagiota

Susan Ashley September 6, 2020 at 7:53 PM A fantastic fantasy, Panagiota. "Milky Way's Starship" - wow! what a ride! Such lovely romance! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Panagiota Romios September 7, 2020 at 6:46 PM Susan! Hi! Thank you, so glad you liked this...,what a wild fantasy, eh? Love, Panagiota xx

Caren Krutsinger September 6, 2020 at 1:14 AM Ah, so beautiful. Very nice. Panagiota Romios September 6, 2020 at 8:49 AM Glad you enjoyed this. Pangie xx