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Celebration

Snow falling, Wind blowing, Flames burning. Young and old… Decorate Christmas trees. By firelight: Children sing Old church hymns. 12/10/2018 Charlieku 3-3-3, sponsored by Charles Messina.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/2/2019 4:16:00 PM

Ahh!! I can see the activities of this family during Christmas. Great winning work. Congrats. Sara

Kaveesha Ruwindi
Date: 1/3/2019 4:14:00 AM

Thank you Sarah, for commenting on my poetry, :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/1/2019 11:43:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win in the Charlieku, Kaveesha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kaveesha Ruwindi
Date: 1/2/2019 8:57:00 AM

Thanks, :)

Charles Messina

Date: 1/1/2019 8:28:00 PM

lovely imagery, Kaveesha. Congratulations on your placement in my contest. Have a healthy and Happy New Year...Charlie

Kaveesha Ruwindi
Date: 1/2/2019 8:57:00 AM

Thank you and wish you the same! :)

Funom Makama

Date: 12/18/2018 11:16:00 AM

Lord God! This has excited me to my soul... My spirit dances like a redeemed bastard with your lines... Keep on writing dear friend.

Kaveesha Ruwindi
Date: 12/19/2018 5:12:00 AM

Hey Funom, thank you for visiting my page and commenting. :)

Jan Allison

Date: 12/15/2018 4:13:00 AM

what wonderful imagery of a traditional family Christmas, I especially love the final stanza with the children singing but also young and old decorating the tree:-) hugs Jan xx

Kaveesha Ruwindi
Date: 12/15/2018 7:31:00 AM

Yes, they relate a lot to our Christmas celebrations. We don't use the fires because I'm from the tropics...but the children singing will tell a lot about me and my sisters, and the Christmas carol we've been having since I was six. thank you Jan for your visit and hearty comment, :)

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 12/10/2018 5:01:00 AM

beautiful haiku in the scenery of celestial celebration

Kaveesha Ruwindi
Date: 12/10/2018 7:56:00 AM

Thank you for your comment and visit. Much appreciated.