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Cedar Cabin

A new neighbor has moved in
On the country place
How do I know, I saw him
Check out the space

It is a small cedar cabin
Above the grassy lawn
There food is plentiful again
Each day a chorus at dawn

He is secretive and quiet
Slips in and out his door
Gathers bugs for their diet
Dew for their water source

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Don Johnson

May 8, 2012 at 5:26 PM

bug sucker mongst the dew, what am i gonna dooo :)

Rockman Pritts

May 8, 2012 at 12:07 AM

This was a good poem Sara. I assume that you were writing about a spider. But now comes the hard part. The critique. I'm lost in the "he" and "their". In the spider world it is usually the female that hunts for the food to feed the young ones. I also think that this poem had more to offer. There should have been more stanzas. My mind is spinning with additions. If you would like to hear them, let me know. I don't want to ever step on anyones poetry. Thanks for making me think. Rockman :-)

Ravindra K Kapoor

May 7, 2012 at 5:39 AM

Fabulous and beautiful. You have weaved a wonderful story on your tiny mini neighbors in such a sweet way. It is more than beautiful and sweet. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra...Sara Ken.

Andrea Dietrich

May 5, 2012 at 8:49 PM

this is so DARLING. what a nice way to tell this story about the new little creatures!!

Joann Grisetti

May 5, 2012 at 7:54 PM

i was all set to move in until you mentiones the bugs. great poem.

John Rhinem

May 5, 2012 at 5:53 PM

Ps. Smile ˜ Thank You, My Dear Beautiful Sara * Bluebirds Seem Much More Pleasant & As For Emily, She Was Caught Up In A Hollywood Productions Screen; A Rewind Moment ˜ My Beautiful Love, Forever; John!:) ˜

Jack Horne

May 5, 2012 at 4:11 PM

love the imaginative way you've described this, my friend

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 5, 2012 at 3:38 PM

lovely visuals Sara and a flare for the outdoors within your lines luv.. hope u are doing well.. I have posted a new poem here and am writing for Writers-Network.com under my pen name Azrielle'

John Rhinem

May 5, 2012 at 11:00 AM

Smile ˜ Sounds Like Dracula's Boy, Collecting All Those Bugs ˜ Hahaha, Your Beauty May Wish To Get Some Garlic Just In Case, My Dear Sweeet Beautiful Sara * Also, Thank You, For Your Kind Visit ˜ My Love, Forever; John!:) ˜

Kash Poet

May 5, 2012 at 8:38 AM

A lovely poem by you Sara..Enjoyed reading it this evening.

Jancarl Campi

May 5, 2012 at 7:14 AM

An interesting nature verse. Nice to see you are still around. So many Soupers I have know are slowly leaving. Take care and have a blessed day, Jancarl