Cavort

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butterflies cavort in the hanging pears.... storm brews across sea I looked it up and they now say that theory is not true, but it is true that small items, animals, tremors, etc. do affect the whole world in some way. In so speaking, "The Butterfly Effect".

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/4/2023 2:37:00 AM

Excellent haiku, so imaginative and pleasant to read. Blessings.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/4/2023 2:40:00 AM

Why, thank you, Victor. I appreciate your visit. Sara

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/3/2023 5:17:00 PM

Hi Sara, I agree with John, your title alone caught my attention. And I was not disappointed by what I read. Kudos to you for using cavort in your poem. Well done. Have a great evening:-) Alexis

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/4/2023 2:07:00 AM

I am glad your were not disappointed, Alexis, by reading my work. Thanks for the nice review of my work and the time spent here. Sara

John Lawless

Date: 10/3/2023 4:35:00 PM

....and you get an extra 50 points for using the word cavort in you poem. That title called and said "ya gotta read this". Nicely done Sara. And as for the "butterfly effect...keep writing as poems are your wings and like the buttery's have an effect

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/4/2023 2:06:00 AM

Thank you, John. Cavort is exactly what they were doing even my husband noticed. Thanks for the compliments on my work. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/3/2023 12:07:00 PM

- "a single act like the butterfly flapping its wings cannot cause a typhoon" ... but has an impact in our world ... lovely haiku, Sara :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/3/2023 3:04:00 PM

Anne-Lise, the butterfly's movement does have an impact if only on our lovingly looking at them in their beauty. Thanks for the visit and leaving such a nice review of my work. Sara