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Caveat At the Cave

CAVEAT AT THE CAVE C areful consider stop think listen feel and go for it A t the entrance of an unknown cave you might find V icissitude and victory over the unknown yourself E nter at your risk to find surety safety reality change A lterations will have to be made in your flow of life T owards uncomfortable truths to shed toxic waste A nger anxiety angst denial will have to be embraced T rauma and turbulence resolved challenged gained T he Ariadne thread-threat is covered in mud under water H uman waste awaits you here for recycling the joy of E ndless seeming loops of minding mindless mind C onverted into passion humility strength and loving A nticipation of labour miracles and novel destinations V oiding the void no longer will shine on your path your E xit from the self-made cave you cannot avoid no more 04th August 2016

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2016 6:20:00 PM

quite a profound one for this topic of caves. And caves are Quite deep as well!!!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/4/2016 7:44:00 AM

It comes to mind the myth of the cave as it is presented in the "Republic" of Plato! A well-thought and deep poem that one should take time to read and digest before commenting! Wonderful in style and content dear, Kai Neumann! A seven!

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 8/4/2016 9:10:00 AM

Hi Demetrios. Well, I did not even think of Plato and all the shadows, but it is so obvious. Something from Philosophy 101 must have stuck deeply...Thank you.