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Cave of our heart

Cave of our heart is God’s abode Fold hands here in prayer Drenched in bliss mists, pay Him an ode Our soul’s lifelong affaire With thoughts, words and deeds just Sidestepping ways of lust Transform this form of dust God search here start Cave of our heart

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/28/2024 5:28:00 AM

I found this poem simply beautiful both in form, imagery, and message. I like 'cave of my heart.' Those words will stay with me today.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 2/28/2024 9:02:00 AM

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/28/2024 4:57:00 AM

Dear US, Your poemis truly beautiful. The imagery of the heart as a "Cave of our heart, God's abode" creates a powerful space for reflection and prayer. The line "Transform this form of dust" reminds us of the potential for growth and change within ourselves. Thank you for sharing this piece that inspires introspection and connection with the divine. - Blessings, Daniel

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 2/28/2024 9:02:00 AM

I’m delighted these words resonate, dear Daniel.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 2/27/2024 10:20:00 PM

Poetry form ~ Quietus