Cave In

Perhaps the way the universe planned it to be
She discovered me randomly
Crossing her path, overdosed on reality
N now I’m stumbling over fantasies
Of her butterscotch skin n cognac eyes
Stealing my sobriety when she showed me that smile
While I’m on this mind trip
Riding on my brakes cos I know I might accelerate
Rush into tomorrow while barely stepping out of yesterday
I kno it’s best to make the most of the present
In unwrapping her identity, I got so close to heaven
I had to check my pulse for a second
How we had so much in common
Our conversations were poetry, rhyming
Lines that I tightroped, tryin not to fall… between
Not cos my chances of gettin caught were weak
But, after all, her existence was hard to believe
I’ve seen many angels but they never bothered wit me
Never gave me that slow dance I wildly craved
So as our bodies embraced n melodically swayed
In n out of my imagination
I hope she didn’t witness my erotic inclinations
Cos I was thinkin
If forever only lasted the rest of the night
That I got the chance to go deep, so deep I touched her next life
Cos she’s TOO perfect, prolly a ruse
The universe is
Pulling on me
N I’m choosing to cave in
Cos never have I seen
Such a beautiful hallucination

KG

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/11/2016 11:53:00 PM
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Date: 5/5/2014 1:02:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Kalvin :) - I choose your first lovely written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/2/2014 1:02:00 AM
Hi Kalvin, I love the hallucination. Nice, :) , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/1/2014 5:00:00 PM
Awww this is so cute :)
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Date: 5/1/2014 4:47:00 PM
Kalvin, made from beauty. Love it! , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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