Cavalcades of Colors

At the end of the day
  Cavalcades of color play
a majestic organ in the sky
  ~ Earthly audiences sigh

Fire-orange blazes on top
  of the chord-cloud's deep gray
As the Heavens' Grand Finale
  drum-rolls your way



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Date: 8/31/2020 9:46:00 AM
A truly magnificent poem, with exotic imagery of gorgeous colors in the sky! It's a FAVE for me, Gershon. Best wishes. :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/31/2020 1:53:00 PM
Thank you so much for the FAVE on this, Evelyn. Always greatly appreciated. Happy Monday! :) Gershon
Date: 8/5/2020 9:32:00 PM
This poem appeals to me in many ways and I do not even know what "cavalcades of color" is but I am looking it up now.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/7/2020 10:51:00 AM
OK. Now I know that it's supposed to be a formal procession, like a parade -- of people... So, I've s t r e t c h e d the meaning out to include people of all c o l o r s, you see. Poetic license and I are good buddies...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/7/2020 10:50:00 AM
Maybe you can let me know what you find under 'cavalcades.' I actually have no idea what it means, but have used it cavalierly here and there anyway. ~ Cavalry Calvin
Date: 8/5/2020 4:50:00 PM
This is a beauty, my friend!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/5/2020 7:18:00 PM
Thanks for the love on this one, Kim! Ciao, Gershon
Date: 8/5/2020 12:02:00 PM
The drums do warn us and the bright striking light in the sky are sometimes foreboding but, I love watching a heavy storm(not dangerous like the hurricane in Florida) what a tragedy, on top of all their other worries and the pandemic. You describe this storm as if I'm expecting it here and now, on this side of the pond. Great imagery Gershon. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/5/2020 7:15:00 PM
So, did you get your storm?! I'm on pins and needles waiting to hear, Jennifer! You'll let me know, eh?! Smiles, Gershon
Date: 8/5/2020 11:55:00 AM
Wow , this poem is awesome Gershon. A majestic organ in the sky. I love it. A Fav :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/5/2020 7:14:00 PM
Thank you so much for the FAVE, Heidi. Always a treat for me! :) gw
Date: 8/5/2020 10:46:00 AM
The sky certainly puts on a spectacular show. Tom
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/5/2020 7:12:00 PM
Better than a drive-in movie, I'd say! ~ Sky-King
Date: 8/5/2020 2:47:00 AM
Fantastic poetic expressions.. Great write Gershon..
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/5/2020 7:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jenish --- for not writing 'phantasmagoric!' lol. Joy and Light, Gershon
Date: 8/4/2020 8:55:00 PM
A very imaginative and beautifully descriptive, captivating rhyme. Best of wishes. :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/5/2020 7:11:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words about this poem, Evelyn. Warm wishes, Gershon
Date: 8/4/2020 8:08:00 PM
A surprising, vibrant version to depict the majesty of a storm. Such a pleasing conjuring!
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/8/2020 5:17:00 PM
Solidly earned win, Gershon. Congratulations
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/5/2020 11:56:00 AM
Such a nice surprise to receive such a lovely comment, esp. since I just logged on today. Thank you so much, Sigrid! Appreciated. :) gw
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