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as i write this i'm being con sumed but not ever understand ing why it's by you of course as a hobo homeless person i gladly and when see ing you see that my desire is more then my want but for some one such as myself i'm on the bottom shelf where people don't bend or stoop to see what is almost lower then their feet and the dust must after all these years turned me grey and having no speaking abilities realize my batteries have long since died a long with me

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Date: 1/14/2020 4:25:00 AM
i DO NOT BELIEVE YHIS... IT IS JUST A MOMENT OF SOLITUDE... POETIC TIME, ALLEGORY, AL THONG MUST PASS @ SALUTE ALKAS
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 1/14/2020 4:26:00 PM
Yes Alkas just a fleeting moment. Thanks.
Date: 1/11/2020 11:14:00 PM
poignant end... sometimes life knocks us back and makes us feel lower than low...even worse when a person has that effect on us.... good write ...
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 1/14/2020 4:26:00 PM
Thank you Sandra.

Book: Shattered Sighs